Item: Reborn with a Primordial Galactic (?¿?) System
Rating: 1
Author: NowGoWithTheFlow

NowGoWithTheFlowLv142yr

2022-07-12 14:16

So who's the MC? I really don't like the way there are two guys one physically an the other in the head. So confusing to me really. Then they curse each other in every sentence, paragraph, chapter. Also pls post all the tags for this.

Reborn with a Primordial Galactic (?¿?) System

PhantomMedjay

4.3

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Liked by 2 people

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PhantomMedjayAuthor

I've stated it elsewhere before, but Carter is an alternative version of myself, with certain characters of mine, such as cursing. Its not for everyone, but I'll be diving into a massive edit of the story in the future, so the cursing will be a little more refined or gone in certain irrelevant points of the storyline. Tags, i've never really bothered with but if you want to write some up for me than ill post it.

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