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For those who are reading this Fanfic, I would like to know how the writing is compared to the beginning. And also if I am managing to have any evolution as a writer. Constructive comments are always welcome.
HP: A Legend Begins
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After you translate in google translate...check the words In many places the word sister is written as brother and Wizarding world as Witches world. You can instead write it as Magical world like you use the world mage. The concept is good but you are rushing it too much and not explaining anything. I hope you improve.
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Got it, I'm planning to edit the earlier chapters a bit more, and also check the recent ones, thanks for the feedback.
reader359841:After you translate in google translate...check the words In many places the word sister is written as brother and Wizarding world as Witches world. You can instead write it as Magical world like you use the world mage. The concept is good but you are rushing it too much and not explaining anything. I hope you improve.