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KingDovahkiin

KingDovahkiin

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If you are here for new experiences thank you, constructive ideas are welcome.

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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Kamery_Driver_1580

    I searched but couldn't find this. Where could I find it?

    Ch 18 Tenseigan and Mugen Tsukuyomi
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to GoldZero

    I also wish I could write more. but as I work the whole week I only have time on the weekend, even so from time to time I make an effort to be able to do a little more, thanks for the support.

    Ch 16 Brother Fights 2
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Entity_Blank

    Sure each Rinnegan has specific abilities, but even so they come with the basic abilities shown by Nagato, being the six paths, attraction and repulsion, and Chibaku Tensei which was created by Hagoromo, the special ability of Hajime's Rinnegan is his personal dimension, where he has control of everything in it, and also being able to teleport to where he already knows or random places.

    Ch 12 Otsutsuki Brothers
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Ballad

    He will make her see things from a not-so distorted perspective.

    Ch 11 Defeating Jigen
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to PanditThanos69

    Hamura and Man, thanks for the support.

    Ch 11 Defeating Jigen
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Trollface

    First I would like to thank you for reading until now, about the characters being like this we must remember that this is a fanfic, so we have to take it into consideration, and about Gamamaru being like this, I'm just trying to show a side that has not been spoken, because the story only tells flowery and heroic things, so everything has its dark side, I hope you understand, and thanks for following up here.

    Ch 3 Senjutsu and Fuuinjutsu
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to reader359841

    Got it, I'm planning to edit the earlier chapters a bit more, and also check the recent ones, thanks for the feedback.

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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Posted

    For those who are reading this Fanfic, I would like to know how the writing is compared to the beginning. And also if I am managing to have any evolution as a writer. Constructive comments are always welcome.

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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Genesis_Alter

    Thanks for the comment, but I don't think this has anything to do with the story I am writing.

    Leaving the laboratory, he enters the entrance hall of the castle, where seven women are waiting, these women were the ones who had the best genes in this world, the best human beings, because, after a lot of research, they will carry his progeny.
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    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to henrique195

    Eu pretendo mais para frente explicar mais sobre isso, porque agora nao ira afetar o enredo.

    Ch 16 Purification 3
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to henrique195

    Estou pensando em fazer isso também. No final de semana irei postar, obrigado pelo apoio.

    Ch 7 Thoughts and Possibilities
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to SpoiledSecrets

    I understand your intention in thinking this way. but it is not said if he was born already knowing how to see the future. and even if he does, when he sees the future it is not clear things, an example is the son of the prophecy that Jiraya searched so much and only after he was concurrently with naruto that he realized this, so seeing the future is not a matter of knowing how to deal with certain things, and he cannot always see perfectly, sometimes blurry, so that is what I think. thanks for the support.

    "Brat then I will call you Hajime, I can teach you an art your mother doesn't even know exists, thank me, for I will show you what power is." And like a naive child, who lived surrounded by peace, and without any problems, Hajime believed in the frog, well that's what he believes, and that way he was taken to his special dimension, a separate place, where the natural energy is much more abundant, even though I already felt it before, but didn't know very well how to use it, I've been waiting for this moment for a long time.
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to LuminousZ

    The shinobi world is special in many ways, so the creation of the clan itself, is so that when he is not in this world, which eventually will happen, because I will not focus much on this world for now, this is all part of an introduction. then the clan is to be able to have control of resources and have all the knowledge accumulated by them, so that when he wants to have what he wants. thanks for the support!

    Ch 7 An Unexpected Encounter
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to kilgan

    Thanks for the support, for now I will only consider the magic and development part, in the future someone will come along who can complete this part of his life.

    Ch 2 Before the Journey 1(Edited)
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Faibani

    About the name being magitech and stuff like that, I have read some HP fanfics, at least three have companies with related names, so if they can, why can't I? I am trying to do my part, but many things can be similar, mainly things that can be generic, because they can have the same meaning and go to the same place. Thanks for the support.

    Ch 3 Before Journey 2(Edited)
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to crackedskull

    Friend, I will edit the first chapters when I have a little time. And as I made clear in the beginning it is my first time writing so I am trying to get the hang of it and also improve. Thanks for the support, I hope you keep reading.

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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Dracul91

    Thanks for the support, and keep going strong, the story will continue to improve as my writing gets better.

    Ch 13 The Ritual 
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to SAM_NZ_1127

    Thanks for the support, and with phrases like this that even though we don't earn anything for writing we can continue, with support like this. And about the other Mummy movies, I'm thinking seriously, because this can be good in many aspects, but also bad. As this arc ends, I will delve a little deeper into the world and also into the past, of the Protagonist and the world as well.

    Ch 13 The Ritual 
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Replied to Fi3l

    About relationships, I'm still thinking about that. But as when there is more than one woman it is already a harem, so it can be considered in a certain way, but I will not force a relationship, not yet, I will be more focused on his personal evolution, and the changes he brings wherever he goes.

    Ch 5 Plans in progress 2
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  • KingDovahkiin
    KingDovahkiin2yr
    Posted

    Author here, I would like to thank everyone who has been supporting me in the writing of my fanfic, where I try to put stories that I think would be good in a different storyline. And about my first chapters that I've been seeing that there are a lot of people asking me to improve them, I will do that, but for now I don't have time, because my life is busy, but I will edit the beginning, to make it clearer and also to have a better intonation for reading, thanks for the support.

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