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I had quite high expectations about the story since it was going really well without any problems, but the moment you introduced the party system and revealed the system everything fell off for me. It was good while it lasted.

Naruto : The System Files

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Wow, so suddenly you can't trust my abilities as a writer to even give a new plot point a chance? Let me get this straight: everything was fine until I introduced the party system, which, by the way, I explained in Chapter 71 is designed to enrich the story with interesting plotlines, character developments, and so much more. This party system is a key to evolving the dynamics within the team. It’s meant to challenge Naruto’s solo tendencies and boost the development of characters like Hinata and Tenten. The story I’m weaving is one I believe in deeply and think will turn out awesome. I even put up a poll, remember? Where 68% of the readers supported this direction. So, it baffles me why you’d drop your faith in my storytelling so suddenly. You mentioned that the story was great until this system reveal—why is that? Is it because you’ve seen other authors handle this trope poorly? Haven't I delivered a compelling narrative up to this point? Where did all that goodwill go? Look, I understand the system reveal trope isn’t everyone’s favorite, but I have a solid plan for it. There's a lot I intend to explore and expand upon thanks to this new element. Why not trust my skills as a writer—a writer who has, until now, given you a story that you've enjoyed? If it's not your cup of tea anymore, that’s fine, but at least don't undermine the story with low reviews based on one change in a long series of successful chapters. Give it a chance, and let's see where this journey takes us together.