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Primordial
PrimordialLv1410mthPrimordial

I dont like it. It is giving cliche chinese novel Vibes. MC is this Savage edgy super genius Man who got tortured by Lord Greengrass and became Wizarding world's Doctor strange. He has a mysterious background which most likely is a grand prince of an ancient kingdom and his father has some history with Bellatrix Black(Minister of magic) who now wants to help the MC by any means possible. But remember, our MC is edgy so he hates her as she tried mind reading on him on her first meeting. All super powerful rich genius girls want his attention. He is super powerful in Quidditch, charms, potions, fighting, stealth and in theivery. He fixed his hands in first year and is capable of strong magic in first year with no prior training. Hogwarts is no longer just a school and slytherin is filled with Young Masters and Miss. Most Canon characters are OOC while Harry is a girl raised by Blacks so a spoiled girl who envy MC. Neville is a Pettegrew lite. There are Atleantian, Ninjas, Dark elves, Demon world, Demon summoners, etc. Basically, don't come here expecting a Harry Potter Fanfic. Its not. Consider this a HP world and that got shredded into pieces, glued together with inspiration from Naruto, DxD, Marvel, DC, and anything else you can think of. Its not copy and paste though. Author does try to integrate it with wizarding world logic. Its too many AU elements such that it stops being a HP Fanfic. Did i also mention another reincarnating girl who is potentially a harem member who is from this rich powerful mafia family and is the very loved only daughter with over protective family? Yeah.... It is not for me but it might suit your raste as it does for many of the readers here. I just wanted to write a review that doesn't just praise this as the best HP novel on the platform because IMO its not even close.

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TurtleOfRainbow
TurtleOfRainbowLv14TurtleOfRainbow

Also just wondering, what do you consider the best HP fanfic on the site? I can't find anything decent aside from a few others that I've already read.

TurtleOfRainbow:I understand not liking it, but alot of what you said about it being chinese-novel esque makes no sense to me. In OU Harry Potter all purebloods act like young masters because they literally are. Also, you clearly didn't read much of it considering you left out any talk of character development. Most of what's currently written is setup for the main storyline, not yet having even seen the main villain yet. Also, the AU magic countries make sense considering they literally follow the mythology of the region, Japan has hand seals and youkai, Norse has runes, etc. There are mentions of Atlantis and Merlin. This isnt some mashup of worlds, but an inspired one in Harry Potter flavoring.
TurtleOfRainbow
TurtleOfRainbowLv14TurtleOfRainbow

I understand not liking it, but alot of what you said about it being chinese-novel esque makes no sense to me. In OU Harry Potter all purebloods act like young masters because they literally are. Also, you clearly didn't read much of it considering you left out any talk of character development. Most of what's currently written is setup for the main storyline, not yet having even seen the main villain yet. Also, the AU magic countries make sense considering they literally follow the mythology of the region, Japan has hand seals and youkai, Norse has runes, etc. There are mentions of Atlantis and Merlin. This isnt some mashup of worlds, but an inspired one in Harry Potter flavoring.

Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

That's literally only Draco in the original books. You probably read a Chinese version of Harry Potter.

TurtleOfRainbow:I understand not liking it, but alot of what you said about it being chinese-novel esque makes no sense to me. In OU Harry Potter all purebloods act like young masters because they literally are. Also, you clearly didn't read much of it considering you left out any talk of character development. Most of what's currently written is setup for the main storyline, not yet having even seen the main villain yet. Also, the AU magic countries make sense considering they literally follow the mythology of the region, Japan has hand seals and youkai, Norse has runes, etc. There are mentions of Atlantis and Merlin. This isnt some mashup of worlds, but an inspired one in Harry Potter flavoring.
Daoist452371
Daoist452371Lv13Daoist452371

Not exactly true Draco was just the most vocal. Everybody who follows him acts quite similar

Transhumanist:That's literally only Draco in the original books. You probably read a Chinese version of Harry Potter.
TheDeath_Angel
TheDeath_AngelLv11TheDeath_Angel

that's cause of fear, not pride...

Daoist452371:Not exactly true Draco was just the most vocal. Everybody who follows him acts quite similar