Review Detail of ShaDow1 in The First Store System
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author i have read 150 chapters i like your story but there are few topics that are annoying like the restrictions that the system has put on Mc that he only have to sell 3 pills per day and his arrogance that have reached heaven. i mean he doesn't have the attitude that a Shop Owner should have. like he should have maintained a good relationship with the king so that king would advertise your shop and mc would have more customers in early stage chapteras
The First Store System
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author i have a question if you don't mind will he create an organisation in later chapters other than only managing his shop like creating him personal army or subordinate for getting his work done because he doesn't have to do everything on his own like in the future when someone far weaker then him offended him but he could send his Subordinates to destroy his kingdom or organisation without he needed to do anything
pinaka_:I've already said in early chapters that he has a God Complex. He is not arrogant, but he is indifferent to others.
Btw Author I’ve heard by around chapter 750 the book start leaning into g*rape often, does that continue? I just can’t do a novel version of the manga Beserk, I’d feel sick and just move onto another book. I just want to know😭😭🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
pinaka_:No, he won't form any organization. He doesn't care how anyone talks to him. Unless someone wants to harm him or his pets, he would not act.
No, there will be some character with that kind of tragedy in their life but the appearance isn't high. I think I have created four or five characters at most with that kind of tragic past in 1300 Chapters.
Tenthousandsuns:Btw Author I’ve heard by around chapter 750 the book start leaning into g*rape often, does that continue? I just can’t do a novel version of the manga Beserk, I’d feel sick and just move onto another book. I just want to know😭😭🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾