Review Detail of Davlyn in The First Store System

There are a lot of things about this book that are interesting and new, however... The title of the book should have been adventures of a store owner. 😂🤣😂 It gets repetitive and rather boring fairly quickly. In 600 chapters it basically follows; store 1-3 chapters, training 2-10 chapters, game 1-10 chapters... rinse and repeat. In those 600 chapters the owner goes on 1 in house slaughter, and 2 outside 'adventures' once to wipe out enemies, the other to 'have fun killing shit'. Almost everything about the actual store process is skipped and random slaughter is added as filler... It's a good read for casual 1-4 chapter per day readers, but it lacks any hook that gives it's audience a 'what happens next?!?' feeling.