Review Detail of Kurdi123 in The First Store System
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If it was without lily then+1 And I dont like World background with Deva are Op. and there are few other things that I dont find good.......
The First Store System
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Look Man, I'm fine with you not liking the story. Maybe my writing wasn't good enough to understand or maybe you didn't have good enough brain to comprehend the story. I'm not forcing you to read this book, if you don't like it, you can just delete it from your library. You commented something about my religion in one comment, I still ignored it since its a free world and people have FOE, but why would you review a book from two accounts?
pinaka_:Look Man, I'm fine with you not liking the story. Maybe my writing wasn't good enough to understand or maybe you didn't have good enough brain to comprehend the story. I'm not forcing you to read this book, if you don't like it, you can just delete it from your library. You commented something about my religion in one comment, I still ignored it since its a free world and people have FOE, but why would you review a book from two accounts?
pinaka_:Whatever you feel good with! At least here you're gaining some attention!
MC's strong, but not the strongest. You can check it if you've some time. Maybe you would like it, maybe you wouldn't.
ORION_4144:Author he said the this mc is not OPest, is that true.
pinaka_:Whatever you feel good with! At least here you're gaining some attention!
His power level is good the way it is now, but I expect him to surpass those deva in future and maybe even venture into other multiverses. Lily should tone down her recklessness a little. She does not own the place. She is good addition to the store though.
pinaka_:MC's strong, but not the strongest. You can check it if you've some time. Maybe you would like it, maybe you wouldn't.
pinaka_:Look Man, I'm fine with you not liking the story. Maybe my writing wasn't good enough to understand or maybe you didn't have good enough brain to comprehend the story. I'm not forcing you to read this book, if you don't like it, you can just delete it from your library. You commented something about my religion in one comment, I still ignored it since its a free world and people have FOE, but why would you review a book from two accounts?