Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Aram: The Detective With Superpowers

Here are my honest thoughts based on what I have read so far: World Background: I do really like the setting about the world that author presented especially with the military and the secret lab, it's quite good for me to imagine. However, I do believe the author will expand more about the world In later chapters and more descriptions especially on the location, place, people, and even the atmosphere to make scenario more interesting and fascinating to imagine (this just personal suggestion, it's okay to disagree) Character: I do like the author give some characterization about the protagonist's parents before their death. I mean some that novel in web novel that I read so far only just mention that their either orphan or their parent killed without a significant appearance or characterization. Because of that, I give that round of applause to even bother to give their death especially the father meaningful to the protagonist and I do like that the parent's death is a personal drive that the protagonist for his motivation. Therefore, I would love to see the protagonist, Aram development and further expansion of his relationship with his dead parents to make the story more interesting like a flashback or a dialogue that mention from Arama of why he truly cared about them. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and it's pretty unique as there is a crime thriller vibe going on. Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!!