I think this has a lot of potential. If the system could have a few more different technologies, it would bring it to a whole new level. I.E halo, titanfall etc.
Dr_Dred
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LIKEThere's a story called the fourth scourge its a good book but it's from a mtl so it's not as fun as a translated work it has like techs from starcraft protoss terran and homeland etc but I gonna give your book a go if it's good I'm gonna give u a review đ
Dr_Dred:I was thinking of introducing new technology from other things so it might come ima just have to find a way to integrate as its already a couple chapters in