Review Detail of Revamping12345 in Adam: The Vagabond

I don't know why people saying character development is unclear or bad or something, its solid to me. His metaphors are a bit, yk, much. "Her eyes mirror of Kaguya, the brightest moon" Was so good, and i didn't know blood-red moon meant Akatsuki, i thought it was Tsukuyomi. Well except for all that, world-building is also solid, character interactions are also good but could use a bit of improvement