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Ultimate_CielLv43yr
2021-09-17 13:18

writing quality makes me cry story development is worse tahn average Mc is exactly like sakura no originality Updates are low and chs are small A world already exists Criticism- Yeah this is bad the author need to rewrite all the charachters act like they arent from their gender and act like the opposite...its quite clear who you want to be the waifu taht is hinata who you didnt genderbend which is a no go if you genderbend do it fathfully overall this fanfic is trash just stop doing this or rewrite cuz this aint getting popular otherwise

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