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XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv152yr
2022-06-15 06:22

This version starts way to slow with a useless prolog world that will be forgotten because the worlds he will go will take hundreds of chapters. just skip until he goes to avatar. Nothing useful until then. After the first 2 chapters.

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FanHarem
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noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

So should i skip to the avatar chaps? Cuz im stuck in the og world chapters(10) and this fic is in my library for many months now. But dont have a motivation to continue readin. Ive tried many time to continue, but... The previous every hole is a goal og and avatar world is good, well until they reach the desert in the avatar world where i dropped it lol. But the previous og world is good than this(in my opinion). So can i just skip to the avatar world and wont miss much??

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Big_Horny_Energy
Big_Horny_EnergyLv3

can you repost the original?

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FanHarem
FanHaremAuthor

it'll just end up getting banned, you can still read it on scribblehub tho

Big_Horny_Energy:can you repost the original?
Big_Horny_Energy
Big_Horny_EnergyLv3

it's a sad day for webnovel

FanHarem:it'll just end up getting banned, you can still read it on scribblehub tho
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Stray99th
Stray99thLv13

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