I've honestly been meaning to leave a review for this story, but something always seemed to come up, but here goes. [Writing Quality: 5/5] Spelling, grammar, punctuation, & text spacing are all near perfect with very few mistakes or areas to nitpick making reading very pleasant. [Story Development: 5/5] The plot is steady without feeling slow and each chapter offers some form of progression. Whether that progression is plot sided, character growth, or relationship advancement between characters. [Character Design: 5/5] Author tastefully increased the ages of the ATLA cast by pushing back Aangs reappearance a few years. The characters aren't 1 dimensional and have logical reasons for their actions. [Update Stability: 5/5] Author sticks to their stated release time frame & even releases an extra chapter on occasion. [World Background: 5/5] Author made the MC's 'homeworld' a combination of the reality mixed with various romance & H-manga that im more interested in for reasons of culture. Author also does a good job with handling the world building of ATLA in a timeline where Aang woke up late so im also eager for the plot to advance to see how its handled. Anyway, thats all from. This story is definitely worth your time and highly suggest giving it a try.

Tedious read. It's so unbelievably boring that I would rather read a no-effort fanfic of Avatar than this snooze-fest of a novel. The plots are overly complex, but not in a way that's meant to entertain. The author adds unto the original plot by mixing elements and characters that would be introduced in the future. The result? A cesspool of combined plots that's not only annoying to read, because it's stretched beyond belief, but also fails to add something new to the table. The Mc? Boring. He has no personality and his internal conflicts so unrelatable and foreign that I believe 90% of the could literally not care. Not to mention the characters making decisions and having dilemnas that didn't exist in the original with the author failing to provide a compelling argument as to why the decisions were made or why the character feels and think differently from the original. I don't think the author understand why fanfics exist. And looking at the author's mcs, it seems like he's struggling with making mcs with personality, which is ironic because he for some reason, with his mc's interactions, sells his characters as charismatic. There's a disconnect from how utterly boring his MCs and how the characters percieve them. It's just sad seeing this much effort go to waste because the author ignores the fundamentals to create his ideal fantasy SI. Fantasy being he has no idea how to make an attractive character because he most likely isn't attractive himself nor does he have a lot of experience with women, making his written interactions stale, inorganic and mostly relies on the character's reactive display to add on his MCs foundation.

I'm sure I'll love this book as it's a rewrite of my most favorite fanfic as it's a rewrite it's even better so let's see how it goes ........

This version starts way to slow with a useless prolog world that will be forgotten because the worlds he will go will take hundreds of chapters. just skip until he goes to avatar. Nothing useful until then. After the first 2 chapters.

Seeing how this a rewrite, i just hope the other charcter that he pick up on his travel will have more a interactive role after they leave their original world.

I'm disappointed with the story. It has a system, apparently worth nothing. The MC is a transmigrator that doesn't know the plot, which makes the whole transmigration useless. Sokka is so annoying that it isn't worth waiting for character development. Just kill him or something. The MC has no drive to get stronger, not even to learn bending, I'm considering the doesn't know the plot, anyone would jump at the opportunity to control the elements. I came here because I wanted lemons in avatar. But now I don't know if it's worth all the frustration from continuing to read. Once I calm down, I will try again. Not too hopeful though.

The best harem FF I have ever read. The interaction of the characters is so real that it makes me admire your work. Stick with this amazing FF.

5 stars from me, because it is the improved version of one of my favorite fanfic tops, as the MC, the FMC, the background plot, the worlds, is really well thought out, of course there may be small improvements, but still I feel really happy to read this work and also improved!

Shameless reviw here, going for the 5 stars because I love the way FanHarem writes and I really appreciate the effort he is making in rewriting the story, hope the original girls stay with him again.