Review Detail of Nzr150cc in Invincible Colorless Butler
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Invincible Colorless Butler
Nzr150cc
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Floner:I think the story should more focus on the mc being butler because the title say so
_Not_The_abyss_:Great novel yo begin with, But the grammar errors is just frustrating, it would be good if you pay attention to that in future updates.
DeathLingers:with a harem thats impossible. had my hopes up until I saw the tags
Without actually reading the story, just based on the summary and tags, I have a question... Romance with an emotionless MC??? How does that even work? Are there side characters with a romance prominent enough to justify the tag, or does the MC eventually break his curse? Because I hardly think one-sided feelings count as romance, and if the MC remains emotionless, then it's one-sided by definition. Because, you know, love is an emotion.
Still pretty early in the story and, while it seems interesting so far, I will point out that others are right in complaining about the grammar. Primarily gender pronouns. Too many mix-ups in regards to he/she, his/hers, him/her, etc. There are other grammar mistakes, but none so eye-catching and blatant. Still, I can mostly tolerate it for now.
