This why there are novels written about destroying MCs like yours. The Main character in these Novels destroys those Chosen Mac's just like yours. For example Paragon of Sin, the MC there hunts down Chosen's that are favored by Heaven, just like your MC, Author. The Chosen MCs are super dumb and they only have a strong will power that's it. In any case, this novel disappointed me. Just a loser granted with Cheats and being saved by girls.

The MCs Intelligence is only as a good as the Authors, no matter how high it's number are ultimately his decisions and plans are up to the Author to write :)

WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ SUPER EDGY MAIN CHARACTER⚠️ I honestly love this novel, very good my vocabulary is not much so I think this novel is very good 👍 👍👍

Man I remember when this book only had under 40 chapters. I read the beginning and I didn't like how it started with the grammar so I dropped it quickly and now a year later this novel is a success man lol. I never expected this.

I am proud to say I was one of the early readers and knew this book had potential, I was sad I couldn't read anymore because I have to pay now and I can't but I really want to. 😭 Such a good story

This is very good, the pacing is not too fast and steady for me the way I like it, I just wonder why the MC is not using his phones abilities that much? In any case I need more chapters please

The moment I read Mario Bros and Mario something in the 2nd chapter I automatically stopped reading cause what the heck?😭. Anyways it's good but could be better tbh.

Writing Quality needs work, I have to go back and read it and fix the sentences in my heads otherwise this story is okay, same generic plot as other store novels. Owner encounters trouble with arrogant young master and his shop becomes famous because he did something impossible lol.

I find it a good read and trust me with the amount of novels I've read on here, I trust my judgement and this is a definitely good 👍 Zzzzzzzz.z.z.zzozpzpzpzzppzpzpzzpzpzp

I like this novel, it's similar to those other novels I read about a cultivator avoiding trouble and choosing choices that benefits him and doesn't get him into trouble, this is definitely my cup of tea. Trust me once you read enough of those cliche novels you'll get tired of it soon enough.

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Not gonna lie, I was worried this novel was gonna be about guy on guy love because that reyan dude is too close to him 😭 anyways good story and emotions.

Is the Dao in your novel?

I actually like the pacing of this story lol, ain't no way I'm about to read a book about a immortal being journeying the world in detail. Just make him OP asf after a long time 🤣 I read the whole novel in a day cause it was really my cup of tea ☕ I also love how original it is with inspiration, I can tell you wanna make the MC be proficient in all Professions since he is technically a Immortal Being and should use his time studying stuff cause if there's one thing he doesn't lack, it is time. With time one could do lots of things. I just dislike how exorbitant the energy cost is thoughhh😭 like why is it so expensive?? And also I hope MC can travel between worlds soon and maybe the whole multiverse.

It's Consciousness if you're looking for the word..

Author you are nerfing the MCs brain, he could have used the Flag Treasure to Immobolize him.

Uhm nvm I thought this novel would be different from other female novels but it's the same as others.

Her best friend is a bad friend in my opinion

Needs more work on sentence structure and proper grammar lol.

I'm glad the MC retains his innocence but sadly it will be gone sooner or later