Review Detail of PrugnaKerai in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

There is a wide variety of English which is used by the author, its refreshing to see on Webnovel. But, the read didn't excite me and there was no flow due to the writing and storyline being choppy and incomplete; there is a lack of smooth transition between events, this makes it hard to read. There are some grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes which can be easily be cleared up, the author would just need to have a re-read. I know this a fresh attempt for the author, so all I can say is keep going! Take feedback from your readers, and it is okay if they think different from your vision, its your story. Well done :)