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2021-08-21 11:41

Based on what I read, this novel has quite detailed and vivid imagery, especially when describing each character's pain or reactionary. The prologue is pretty good, to be honest especially with the pirate's settings. As for the MC, I think he is fine for now and I like that he has a close relationship with someone. But, I hope I can see more about the background of his life and further development. For the cons, this is my personal taste, but I guess I need to add more detail when showing things such as objects like the pirate ships and character appearance. Personally, I am kind of hard to imagine their appearance since I love to see a well-detailed appearance. I think that's all I have to say, thank you very much and Keep up the good work!!!

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