Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in Marvel: Meditation System
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The writing quality is not great but it is readable... The stability of updates is fine so I rated that pretty high... The Story Development is neither good nor bad to be honest... if you are someone looking for a wild time with wild theories and huge spirals of just random ideas, then the story development is for you... I rated the story development low because there is no reason or rhyme to his choices.... and even if there is, the mc doesn't explain it properly anyway... The Character Design leaves a lot wanting because the author leaves a lot of gaps for us to fill in... he doesn't tell us how Ward feels, he makes us figure it out and that makes no sense to me... As for the background... a badly described marvel background... when writing fanfics, I judge a background by what you add to it besides the cannon, and this adds nothing... I believe it takes away if anything. #JustBeingHonest
Marvel: Meditation System
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Alcoholic_Panda:being honest is good, first fic, expected this, will try to improve, this will probably be rewritten, kidna the plan from the start, write ,get experience, get better, rewrite, repeat until i am satisfied with the quality
Well I prefer a movie or novel, where choices are described but not explained. Just show the reader the emotiona let them be part of the story and not seperate them by trying to explain the reasoning of the character. I don‘t know the novel, but felt disturbed by the tipps left behind for the author to stumble over. And a further tip, try to incorporate a hidden story, something that is there in one centence but is never explained, but adds depth to the world/characters and so on. Do your beat, author.