Review Detail of valient_vicky in Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
Review detail
Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
Evertruth727_
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No, it not a mistake. Just the story progress was not accepted by me, not makes the story progress bad. It is a bad progress only for me. Don't take it us negative just think readers like me loves the to see a solo mc and his atrocities.
Evertruth727_:thank you for the kind review. This is my first book after all. Mistakes happened.
ah yes. Different people like different approaches to a story. I understand... thank you for giving my book a chance though... 💪💪💪
valient_vicky:No, it not a mistake. Just the story progress was not accepted by me, not makes the story progress bad. It is a bad progress only for me. Don't take it us negative just think readers like me loves the to see a solo mc and his atrocities.