Review Detail of Astro_young in [COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH

Item: [COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

Astro_youngLv12yrAstro_young

It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.

[COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH

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UselessAccAuthorUselessAcc

You review made my day, thank you. :))) I feel you, basically that's the issue I'm trying to fix by making more interactions with well known TBATE character called Caera. I don't want to spoil, but just telling you that I'm working on that.

2yr

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Your review* (A little typo in my previous comment)

UselessAcc:You review made my day, thank you. :))) I feel you, basically that's the issue I'm trying to fix by making more interactions with well known TBATE character called Caera. I don't want to spoil, but just telling you that I'm working on that.

2yr