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ASH_MKLv113yr
2021-10-01 11:07

I really want to read this story but becoming the Twin brother of Arthur, Author are you sure Absolute Being didn't played a trick on Ashborne. If the upcoming story can be guessed already, What's the fun in that. Well I will some more Chapters and see if this is Worth reading.[img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Actually, I never intended to make him Twin Brother of Art, but I need to do this to progress plot. I planned lot of things with both Arthur and Ashborn. If you think that this will follow original plot, you are pretty much wrong.

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