To be honest, this is one of the greatest tbate fanfic that I have seen. It has a very original approach to the story but it does copy some parts of the story but I think that was necessary for it develop and even if there is it is mostly fast paced and was not given much importance.

It's a fun story, apart from the protagonist who I found very boring and pathetic, it's a good story in general........................ ..................................

New story with great potential, and I look forward to where you will go with this Fanfiction. ......................................................

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It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.

At first I was hesitant because it wasn't a loser who reincarnated but a very serious character in my view.... I couldn't find any intresting fanfics so I just read few chapters... It was surprising good, it became one my favorites along with the other novel where we have Wanda and his brother as couples and mainlead

I like that you did well on making Arthur fall down the cliff because I'm sure if you didn't do it well, then many people will throw a tantrum lol though I'm not sure in other people if it's really "well" but it is in my own bias opinion, 5stars here to increase the rating and good luck to your work.

I am not a novel reader soo i didnt know what the heck was going around in the later chapters..Still Great fanfic ------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanks for writing this piece of art, it fully delivered the hype I expected from the crossover between Solo Leveling and The Beginning After The End. You didn't make some weird additions, it was just things from both stories merged in the purest forms possible. I loved it!