Overall, it's decent. I felt a bit jarred as the MC's character doesn't come across as the domineering of an emperor like what I think was intended. he instead felt bipolar, having sudden fits of rage and threatening people before deciding to go to a strip club. The latter I can understand, especially given the circumstances, but it is the contrast between the two and how quickly he switches between them. As for why I say he isn't domineering, take him referring to Azazel as Azalzel-kun. Kun, being the Japanese honorific, is used for a close friend or someone of a lower status, it carries a sense of intimacy. The way it has been used though does not come across in a domineering sense but instead as being demeaning, unprovoked as well. This is simply not the attitude of a competent emperor, especially one coming to request assistance. as for spelling, the constant and inconsistent shift in how speech is defined, using either of - or ' ' or " " is not particularly appealing. As I say, the novel itself is pretty good, but there a points like this which subtract points in my book
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Yes...I get your point of view... But if your base your view on the DXD arc it's an arc where Marek 'acts'...It not his true self...Everything he does in there is mere deception. Atleast read past chapter 31...Its rare to see readers give such good reviews...I sincerly wish to know your opinion when you get to the Code Geass and Naruto Arc
As for the punctuation....I am really sorry...At first I though french and english had the same punctuation... So it was messed up hhhh...It get better latter
