Review Detail of KiaoSuvan in Epic of Plaiyin : Sun rising (Canceled)

Hello, it's the author here! I hope you enjoy my epic tales. I try my best to deliver this ambitious project, and as I spend my time writing and meet other writers I realized I still have a lot to learn. English is my second language and my grammar is not the best and my choice of words can be strange. There are so much I want to show everyone but can't be described properly in words and many more thing I struggle with. I want to improve myself, to be able to tell stories better than before. I can constantly re-edit any mistake I notice for I want this to be a story that the reader can enjoy reading as much as the author enjoy telling this story. Please feel free to point out any mistake I made and I will try my best to fix it or clarify my intention. But overall, I just want to thank you for giving my story a chance. all your support means a lot to me and I will continue to work hard and achieve my dream of writing epic tales that will be adapted in the future, while also provide you with good entertainment. Thank you very much! I hope you have fun and have a good day!