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The author seems to have forgotten his MC is actually human and 4 years old. Instead you want me to believe he can go and eat at a restaurant alone and pay for the food without anyone questioning it? You should have made him older if that's how you are gonna write him. And let's not forget he doesn't seems human at all having the personality of a potato.

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Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )

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