Their evolved form? Since when does torkoal have an evolution?

The author seems to have forgotten his MC is actually human and 4 years old. Instead you want me to believe he can go and eat at a restaurant alone and pay for the food without anyone questioning it? You should have made him older if that's how you are gonna write him. And let's not forget he doesn't seems human at all having the personality of a potato.

I quite like this fanfic, at first the slow pace threw me off but once I got past the first chapters I got hooked. Don't let the trolls, trying to lower this fanfic rating, make you miss a good pokemom fanfic, though keep in mind the slow pace tag is there for a reason.

This is just wrong, growl and bubble should not be here, I'm once again just confused

Big Pecks is an ability, not an attack, I'm so confused about this

Yep, you're right it was against 10k

The third raikage died while fighting 1000 iwa Shinobi days before the end of the third war you know, konoha supposedly had nothing to do with it, though this is an AU world so you do you