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Miya_Tango
Miya_TangoLv23yr
2021-10-30 04:59

Wow! You have a great imagination, man (or woman)! You nicely create the world you write about. The plot is interesting. The story is a good read!

Ravens of Eternity

CeritusOrbis
4.6
479 Chs

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CeritusOrbis
CeritusOrbisLv13

Thanks kindly! I try to make it entertaining and I hope you continue enjoying.

3yr
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Nivardo_Garcia
Nivardo_GarciaLv1

I invite you to read my story is called eternal love (volume 1)

2yr
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Hootwolf
HootwolfLv13

I love everything about this book except the fact that it locks the chapters starting from chapter 14. I love the concept of a futuristic world and the writing is definitely great but it sucks that you have to use fast passes and/or unlock chapters so early on, and you can't really enjoy the book without spending.

3yr

Maya_Grey
Maya_GreyLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Crash_0537
Crash_0537Lv2

I like the story so rate it like this but the problem is that this will turn into romance and I'm not ready for that yet..... So yeah乁( •_• )ㄏ

3yr
Nicochoco_77
Nicochoco_77Lv15

I finished reading up to the latest chapter and i gotta say i really enjoyed this novel and am really excited to see what comes next! Thanks for the amazing work

2yr
NovaENT
NovaENTLv11

I am giving the low world background because of the physics problems. The author mentions speeds like 200m/s 100m/s as the maximal speed of some engines. They are in space and in space, there is no terminal velocity other than the speed of light so engines can keep accelerating until they reach it. In space, the speed is almost of no consequence. The only important is relative speed or delta-v (delta velocity). That is a difference of speed between two objects. If the author wants to express the power of engines he/she should express it as acceleration and not speed. Speed starts to matter only in the atmosphere because the friction of air introduces terminal velocity. To surpass this terminal velocity you need to increase engine power and when the speed increases so does the friction so to keep increasing maximal speed you need to increase engine power. In space, there is no friction and therefore no force that limits the maximum achievable speed of shuttler/ space fighter/rocket/missile/escape pod. The only terminal velocity in space is the speed of light and only when objects is moving in relativistic velocities the engine speed maters. So if there is some engine speed limit it should be in percents of C that is about 2000000 m/s upwards and more likely 10000000 m/s and absolutely nowhere as lows 200 m/s. I like the story but these physics problems introduce in me a such massive dissonance. (That is't how reality works like). The other sci fi things aren'T that problematic but this is to me so fundamental that it breaks me out of the story. And it would be so easy to fix it wouldn't affect the story much and I would be glad to give a much higher rating than what I given now.

2yr
toninho1br
toninho1brLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
MonicaRey
MonicaReyLv2

Love the cover page! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 The story is interesting, also your characters. The world you have created is nicely designed. Well done, Author.

3yr
Dragonskeeper
DragonskeeperLv12

The other review says all i have to say but thought you deserved a 5 star for just how brilliant the bit I’ve read is i commented on chapter before i read review lol

3yr
CeritusOrbis
CeritusOrbisLv13

Author here coming in with the 13th review, so you don’t have to, lol. Wanted to take this time to thank everyone for all your support. I appreciate all of you, even if you’ve only read a single chapter. For those who comment regularly - sorry I don’t respond right away. I can only see them if I review the chapters over and over (or if I visit your profile directly). And for those who don’t comment at all and just read - I want you to know that I see you, and I appreciate you. For anyone who wants to chat, feel free to reach out via Discord. Hope you all continue to enjoy the book and I hope to see you all at the end!

2yr
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