I tried I really do but it's just not my cup of tea. Personally I believe that fanfic should not be retelling of the original plot just with extra person. He is doing whatever dumbles told him to do and babysit the plot No offense but it's not for me but great writing quality tho
mark_kiple
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LIKEif the review of this site had to be done after reading the story completely, it would make no sense. since many of them make it impossible... yours as an example
mark_kiple:idk bout you bro, but imo a review is an evaluation of a piece of something. if you haven't seen the whole of it or at least until the latest rendition, it's not really a review, it's a nitpick, but you do you mate, webnovel's review system is busted anyway