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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv103yr
2021-09-05 15:33

This is a butchering of an amazing manwha. The author cares little to not at all about character development or story development. His writing makes it seem like he is in a rush to finish the ff and doesn't actually care about his readers at all. His MCs system is all kinds of messed up and even after multiple requests from a multitude of people he still refuses to fix it. All in all i give the story at best a 3 out of 10. I highly recommend staying clear of this ff as like i said the author clearly cares little if at all about his readers.

Solo Leveling: The Monarch Of Storms

God_Of_Hate
3.9
23 Chs

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Morpheus146
Morpheus146Lv4

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Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv12

This is usually what happens to inexperienced authors. LOTS and I mean LOTS of authors have butchered stories that have character development. Some just sticks to what the character was at the beginning of the story and not change to what they're gonna be compared to the real story where the character actually gets development. Just sad. Some even haven't even seen or read the story they're reading off of and only writing things based on other people's POV and not see the development the character has throughout the story.

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MahoV
MahoVLv5

I really like your story please don't drop it, also can we have a mass release? ?? .

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dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

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Niurem
NiuremLv3

Adds nothing honestly i dont know why i read so muchzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ZzzzzzzzzZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz_zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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APTV
APTVLv1

I dropped after reading a few more chaps, what's the point of this fic? this is literally all copy past and just change mc and there u go, I felt I was reading the original all over again. Writing quality-4/5 Stability of updates - 5/5 Story Development- 1/5 Character Design- 1/5 World background- 1/5 Total score- 2.4

3yr
MIR_Sajeeb
MIR_SajeebLv14

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Nevren
NevrenLv1

It's just a canon rehash with an extra character. Do not waste your time reading this if you've read the original. It's just a canon rehash with an extra character. Do not waste your time reading this if you've read the original. It's just a canon rehash with an extra character. Do not waste your time reading this if you've read the original. It's just a canon rehash with an extra character. Do not waste your time reading this if you've read the original.

3yr
Monarch_of_systems
Monarch_of_systemsLv5

Yeh well i was really looking forward to this story when the author announced he was making a solo leveling ff! And i wanna start of by saying thank you and i really appreciate! So for the review, the start of the story was incredible, is about a guy who was sent to solo leveling world by a god and if u read this authors first novel the god here is that mc! The system is similar to solo leveling but got no complains there. Excellent grammer and overall great start to the story and i hope the author can keep going ( sorry about my rambling here; just so excited for this novel)

3yr
MYTH_
MYTH_Lv4

This is the best Solo Leveling Fan-Fiction I have read so far. It has great character development and the writing quality is impressive. Thank you, author, for sharing this Fan-Fiction with us.

3yr
CookieFighter
CookieFighterLv4

Why ? ´cause i like it. want another reason ? i like it. so instead of reading reviews, go read it right now by yoursel….…. . . . . . . . . .

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