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Review Detail of Carlos_Balbizan in Peerless Twin Spears Of Douluo Dalu

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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yrCarlos_Balbizan

I just started reading so I can't say much...but the writing is perfect, and what made me give it 5 stars is that he has a martial soul like a rifle(it's really the first time I've seen this, it's not a very original idea but at the same time i have never seen anything like that in a douluo fanfic) keep up the good work

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Peerless Twin Spears Of Douluo Dalu

ArchDevilThearch

Liked it!

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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

And by the way... put in the title that he has a rifle as a spirit instead of twin spears, this will attract a lot more people to the story.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

it's getting worse... mc seemed like a cool and nice guy in a child's body, but now we can see that he's just a child with no specific personality.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

I was enjoying it... then the school plot begins where literally everyone is going to die!!!!!!! why develop garbage if you're going to kill them