Review Detail of Jeffrey_Dalumpines in I Evolve Everything

Item: I Evolve Everything
Rating: 5

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Jeffrey_DalumpinesAuthor2yrJeffrey_Dalumpines

Gonna be Shameless I'm going to give a five star with to my work. You better to check it out , this story might be a good one for you. And I also accept opinion about my work , you know I'm not good at grammar .

I Evolve Everything

Jeffrey_Dalumpines

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Jeffrey_DalumpinesAuthorJeffrey_Dalumpines

sorry , it's my first time writing and English language wasn't my best

Empyrium:Yeah, the idea isn't bad but your grammar is, it kind of ruins the story

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EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

Yeah, the idea isn't bad but your grammar is, it kind of ruins the story

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yohananmikhaelLv3yohananmikhael

take your time in writing and editing. at least it would cover the problems. and as for your grammar, try installing Grammarly and other software for checking basic grammar structures. they're at least helpful and would lessen mistakes.

Jeffrey_Dalumpines:sorry , it's my first time writing and English language wasn't my best

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Monarch_Of_HellLv4Monarch_Of_Hell

use grammarly dude even mtl novels r better than this.

Jeffrey_Dalumpines:sorry , it's my first time writing and English language wasn't my best

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