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Jeffrey_Dalumpines

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2020-10-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jeffrey_Dalumpines
    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Replied to JuicyWetPizzaCream

    his companion beast, the nine chaos tail fox

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Replied to yours_truly_reader

    thank you for your hint, I'm currently editing the whole chapter

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Replied to cooper_lehnert

    thank you for your truthfulness, currently, I was editing it since the grammar and spelling

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Replied to Empyrium

    sorry , it's my first time writing and English language wasn't my best

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
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    it means he's still keep waiting even he knew that she's wouldn't come

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
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    aah, this paragraph was part of the time where Jee's reminiscing the past event.

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Replied to 733x

    oh ok , I gonna try your suggestion. Thank you

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Posted

    Gonna be Shameless I'm going to give a five star with to my work. You better to check it out , this story might be a good one for you. And I also accept opinion about my work , you know I'm not good at grammar .

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Posted

    hey there, an idea is good but the story pace so fast and the way it's been written was so direct. Make it less direct, so that it's make the reader hoke up by curiosities

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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines2yr
    Commented

    hmm, this story is good

    Ch 20 Old Demon Han Has a Breakthrough
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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines3yr
    Commented

    this was so goodđŸ€©

    Ch 139 The Song Clan Has a Death Wish
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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines3yr
    Commented

    hahaha this story was so good đŸ€©

    Ch 48 Smacked Upside the Head
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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines3yr
    Commented

    this story is awesome

    Ch 61 Elemental Spirit World
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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines3yr
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    Jeffrey_Dalumpines3yr
    Commented

    Thanks God , I only need one site to read this novel

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