decent story but the chapters are published out of order a few times making it uninteresting to read. so don't bother trying to open it.....
Magic_
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LIKEI don't think your publishing company's mistakes are the readers fault. The reader only has to take into consideration what they experienced not what you wanted them to.
Magic_:ouch, they were fixed, but the company i have to publish through take for ever to update when I do. pretty rough comment for something I can't immediately fix.