At starting mc was decent but then in just one ch, he basically become a mind-controller r*p*st....another your hypocritical r*p*st mc....happy by cuckolding everyone....forcing all the women.....I liked his character at starting but he just pulled a restraint BS and r*p* women....now he mind-controlled the women...Disappointing!
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Thanks for reading until now, and yeah sorry to have disappointed you, I didn't have any ideas of doing NTR before and i forgot to add the tag, this is the first and last NTR moment but yeah for those who didn't wanted an NTR or mind control, i will make an alternative chapter where there wouldn't be anything like that and continue the story from there. But one more time sorry to have disappointed you 😥
Yeah man, I truly like mc's character at starting as he developed relationships and some were forced like dragon accepting mate which was okay....but this really I mean man he literally mind-controlled all of them.....if it was villain then I could have somehow accepted but Grayfia? she did deserved such treatment tbh...I really hope that you tone down his character to his previous self...that was much better....please don't turn him into those evil mc who just r*p* women or mind-control them....I hope that you will improve in this part.
I'm OK with you but you doesn't have to give 0 stars to a newbie author.
why don't you delete those two chapter and restart the story....I really enjoyed the first 29 chapters.....
You make a rapist mc, its your faulT you rUined a good ff
gracias ...me salvaste
