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ZenNeedsCoffee
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2021-10-30 17:10

3 chapters into the novel and my urge to write a review after years of inactivity is kicking me now. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude for the original idea of this novel. I have fed up with system stories so for me to be able to finally read such an original story, I guess this is my lucky day :D *Writing quality: unique writing style i like it..5 stars *Stability of Updates*: checking the releases of the chapters...hmmm nice..5 stars My only wish for the author, quality comes first before quantity so I don't mind for like 2-3 chapters releases in a week (for example) as long as the story retains the excitement I have now but if none, hehe~ :D🥄 (imagine the spoon as a knife) *Story development*: I must say that in these three chapters, the author is taking a step by step approach very carefully to develop the story. I even imagine some scenes happening in my head. YESSHHH....5 stars Btw i also like the idea of good and bad side. The boy's family have been doing some deed like killing demons who was considered threat to them. The promised neverland vibes hit me. "are the bad guys bad? are the good guys good?" these questions keep popping out of my head. The thoughts and consideration poured into this novel earned you a spot in my library. *Character design*: as I am only in the first 3 chapters, I do not understand the characters deep enough. But since Im liking the characters...5 stars *World development*: ORIGINAL IDEA. no system. thank you :3 I love dark stories like this and I hope that I can learn more about the characters in this novel. I want to know their story through their own view. Hehe I try to write an honest review without spoilers, so this takes me some time. Go easy on me ye (edit: changed from 4 stars of writing quality to 5 stars)

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ZenNeedsCoffee
ZenNeedsCoffeeLv4

anyway, if you love stories like this, i recommend you to try read little prince in the ossuary. This is my favorite psychological dark story (can be disturbing)..it is confusing at first but after few chapters, you will understand. check it out in NOVEL UPDATES

Moonaisy
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(casually backing away from the scary spoon) First, please don't kill me, I'd like to live pls Second of all, THANK YOU? THIS IS LIKE THE BEST REVIEW EVER, I WANT TO HUG YOU (put away the knife-spoon pls) Third of all, I'm actually trying my best to upload everyday, but my dear stupid me love to overthink everytime I've written a chapter. I'm so afraid that my story gets boring or getting worse. I know how the story goes, I know how it ends, but I'm afraid that the excitement of the story is withering away. I'm trying my best to keep the quality good, don't worry :D So yeah, pls bear with me, I hope my book will not disappoint you in the future. (Currently trying so hard to not spoil plot twists so that I can make you stay :3) Lastly, I love how honest your review is. Again, thank you so much for the five stars! ps. you don't need to thank me because I'M THE ONE WHO'S THANKFUL OF YOU Have a nice day~

ZenNeedsCoffee
ZenNeedsCoffeeLv4

keep up the good work! cant wait for the surprises you will show to us

Moonaisy:(casually backing away from the scary spoon) First, please don't kill me, I'd like to live pls Second of all, THANK YOU? THIS IS LIKE THE BEST REVIEW EVER, I WANT TO HUG YOU (put away the knife-spoon pls) Third of all, I'm actually trying my best to upload everyday, but my dear stupid me love to overthink everytime I've written a chapter. I'm so afraid that my story gets boring or getting worse. I know how the story goes, I know how it ends, but I'm afraid that the excitement of the story is withering away. I'm trying my best to keep the quality good, don't worry :D So yeah, pls bear with me, I hope my book will not disappoint you in the future. (Currently trying so hard to not spoil plot twists so that I can make you stay :3) Lastly, I love how honest your review is. Again, thank you so much for the five stars! ps. you don't need to thank me because I'M THE ONE WHO'S THANKFUL OF YOU Have a nice day~
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