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2021-09-30 02:36

yet another masterpiece from a talented author. read the first chapter and i'm already HOOKED with the story. Two different worlds but the same family, but both are just as horrible lol. I feel sympathy with the little brother, Axel :(( poor buddy. But anyways, i can't wait to see what the author offers in the future!! ;)

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Moonaisy
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Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like it ^_^

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ZenNeedsCoffee
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3 chapters into the novel and my urge to write a review after years of inactivity is kicking me now. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude for the original idea of this novel. I have fed up with system stories so for me to be able to finally read such an original story, I guess this is my lucky day :D *Writing quality: unique writing style i like it..5 stars *Stability of Updates*: checking the releases of the chapters...hmmm nice..5 stars My only wish for the author, quality comes first before quantity so I don't mind for like 2-3 chapters releases in a week (for example) as long as the story retains the excitement I have now but if none, hehe~ :D🥄 (imagine the spoon as a knife) *Story development*: I must say that in these three chapters, the author is taking a step by step approach very carefully to develop the story. I even imagine some scenes happening in my head. YESSHHH....5 stars Btw i also like the idea of good and bad side. The boy's family have been doing some deed like killing demons who was considered threat to them. The promised neverland vibes hit me. "are the bad guys bad? are the good guys good?" these questions keep popping out of my head. The thoughts and consideration poured into this novel earned you a spot in my library. *Character design*: as I am only in the first 3 chapters, I do not understand the characters deep enough. But since Im liking the characters...5 stars *World development*: ORIGINAL IDEA. no system. thank you :3 I love dark stories like this and I hope that I can learn more about the characters in this novel. I want to know their story through their own view. Hehe I try to write an honest review without spoilers, so this takes me some time. Go easy on me ye (edit: changed from 4 stars of writing quality to 5 stars)

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