I don't have much to say the plot is empty it has practically many gaps and things are not explained well the grammar much to improve the story is too accelerated it is not read much leaves much to be desired it would be nice if you take the time to develop the MC and the plot why everything with moments from one side to the other and the slave-wife came out of nowhere in a single chapter and already calls her his wife as if nothing does not leave much to be desired
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