Only read the first chapter but the writing quality is a mess, it's like someone wrote it in google translate and filtered it through multiple languages before posting it here.
Taidanotsumi
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LIKETaidanotsumi:Well my native language is not English . Also I make it easy for normal people and this Person PoV do you think he will have a good grammar
Hey no worries man, at least you're trying. A few tips, break up your paragraphs, no one likes reading giant blocks of text, it'll also make it seem like there's more to read than there actually is.
Taidanotsumi:Well my native language is not English . Also I make it easy for normal people and this Person PoV do you think he will have a good grammar
Taidanotsumi:Well my native language is not English . Also I make it easy for normal people and this Person PoV do you think he will have a good grammar