Review Detail of Touji_san in Out for Karma: One Piece
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I readed dozens of one piece fanfictions over the last year, and i must confess, this is one the most creative work i have ever seen, shure he does acompany the straw hats, but he has a great past before entering the pirate life, and the love interests doenst fall all over our protagonist without reason, no, there is a construction to arrive it and its pretty fun to whatch it, the MC is funny, charismatic, smart, bit loving and cunning too( in a good way), overall, a nice fanfic to have good time, the only thing is that our protagonist doenst really posess a certain goal per see, but is just a observation, not really a bad point. Ps: listen to the one piece "funny" and "peaciful" ost while reading, really imerses your experience
Out for Karma: One Piece
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I don't know what point in the story you reached, so I'll try to not spoil. With his gravity alone Rick is very powerful at some point, though not quite Vice-Admiral level. But he's getting there and fast. Yes he could have train harder and yet he didn't. IT was necessary for his development.
Touji_san:Pss:. the Mc could be a little more stronger, i mean he could have spended more time training harder, but dont get me wrong, hes much stronger then the whole crew, maybe bording Vice-admiral? I dont know, its not explicitally explained.
Hrist_Waltz:I don't know what point in the story you reached, so I'll try to not spoil. With his gravity alone Rick is very powerful at some point, though not quite Vice-Admiral level. But he's getting there and fast. Yes he could have train harder and yet he didn't. IT was necessary for his development.