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Sfenky
SfenkyLv42yr
2021-11-30 04:59

It has started good however it detoritied as it progressed sadly. As i read more and more i started to find the story stupid :/ Well this is to be expected as the story is about a eroge game however there are novels like Little Tyrant Doesnt Want to Meet with a Bad Ending which are doing a much better job even thought they are abput eroge games/ novels too.

It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge

Xeoz
4.4
166 Chs

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Xeoz
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Find it interesting? Leave a review. Anyway, advance chapters will be put on my p@treon. If you want to check it out just go check Xeoz. Needless to say, if you guys find it enjoyable leave some feedback about it. I really appreciate good or bad feedbacks. Thank you

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TFH
TFHLv6

Its 5 am.... i cûrsê author for keeping me reading all chapters in one go.... i demand very êrôtîc chapters with all details. It needs to be jûicy

3yr
Sovereign_Turtle
Sovereign_TurtleLv14

Mc is underage and gets R@p3d basically everyday while he's sleeping. The author let's us know by making it obvious to us but the mc is confused "what's going on?" It's incredibly creepy and has completely ruined a character for me. Worst part is, you'll find out it's not just 1 person doing it to him. It's multiple. Do you have a R@p3 fetish author? there should be some sort of warning because it's pretty foul.

3yr
Daoist_Of_Yanderes
Daoist_Of_YanderesLv3

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REDVI
REDVILv4

Honestly, the mc is just a horn dog and only thinks with his lower mind thorough out more than half the chapter. And it is just all-around annoying to read about the mc when some of the important decisions he makes can be fatal to his strength. An example would be he would have picked the fox spirit cause it can transform into a girl like really dude... If he just lowered down his perverted mentality it would make this novel 3 times better maybe more.

2yr
KingParadox
KingParadoxLv1

I'm sorry but I can't with the academy arc I left out previous clichés because you handled them well but the cliché of being told no mana the director uses it starts in the lowest class is so overused it's tiring and so poorly implemented it's hard to read I try to keep going but I'm having a hard time so I'll leave it luck to others

2yr
DaoistglcrYM
DaoistglcrYMLv3

The Writing quality is good, and the world-building is also good but the character design and story development need much work. The characters most of the time doubting their actions, then as soon as something happens they go in a self-blame mood and then to the I will sacrifice myself mode. From a rather interesting start, it slowly shifts towards the Japanese anime/manga style of characters (the indecisive, self-blaming, beta-ish kind). This not only ruins the characters that take turns to blame themselves for each part of the plot but also the story takes a great hit each time with their rather annoying self-talk. The story would be much better if about 50 percent of the MC's and other characters' self-talk is just removed, cuz now all you get is plot points immediately followed by the next character blames themself for this part of the story. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 2 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4 The total score - 3.2

3yr
cynic_0
cynic_0Lv14

The early chapters is good but it quickly deteriorate, it is simply the mc being played by other people, I hope he grows some balls or something.

2yr
InvalidUN
InvalidUNLv4

I won't say anything about that thing that causes my thing to be deleted, C'mon it's an hrem novel with 3x pli cit content how are we supposed to say a thing if we can't even say that thing, dunno what are the tabo o words but I just want to leave a review to support the author. So pardon if it would be really useless hehe. Just check the novel on your own I guarantee that this story is meant for us (my fellow man of cultures xD) and write a review without saying those thing. lolol

3yr
M1XALI0
M1XALI0Lv14

even though it had a really good story the plot felt focred and annoying. ...............................................................

2yr
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