The Writing quality is good, and the world-building is also good but the character design and story development need much work. The characters most of the time doubting their actions, then as soon as something happens they go in a self-blame mood and then to the I will sacrifice myself mode. From a rather interesting start, it slowly shifts towards the Japanese anime/manga style of characters (the indecisive, self-blaming, beta-ish kind). This not only ruins the characters that take turns to blame themselves for each part of the plot but also the story takes a great hit each time with their rather annoying self-talk. The story would be much better if about 50 percent of the MC's and other characters' self-talk is just removed, cuz now all you get is plot points immediately followed by the next character blames themself for this part of the story. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 2 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4 The total score - 3.2
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The blaming part of the story is for the concept that's only meant for that arc. Well, the self-talk is more on understanding the character themselves.
