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X_Cibula
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2021-09-05 15:33

succha cool story it starts a little slow but nott too much just at the right pace and it keeps it perfectly. the story never goes stale. the hints are nicely dropped and the characters are well written. it is not keeping you on the edge all the time. i really like it

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The_unknown_guy
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Lol thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it

X_Cibula
X_CibulaLv3

im just 25ch in but i had to write this. so im not done yet 😁

The_unknown_guy:Lol thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it
The_unknown_guy
The_unknown_guyAuthor

Read further and be disappointed by the story :)

X_Cibula:im just 25ch in but i had to write this. so im not done yet 😁
X_Cibula
X_CibulaLv3

if you can write such an interesting story this well at the beginning and then somehow you manage to make it bad by the end the you have the potential to create one which is perfect throughout. so don't give up. but im only halfway in so let's see

The_unknown_guy:Read further and be disappointed by the story :)
The_unknown_guy
The_unknown_guyAuthor

I see

X_Cibula:if you can write such an interesting story this well at the beginning and then somehow you manage to make it bad by the end the you have the potential to create one which is perfect throughout. so don't give up. but im only halfway in so let's see
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