Well i don't really understand why you made your premium chapters with no grammar issue but kept your free chapters full of errors..... (they are the most important because it's them that make the readers stay or leave) Other than this your novel is pretty good.

For those who want to read this, if you hate dumb main characters that is dumber than a donkey. Don't read it aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

just I usually don't mind grammar but when it's nearly every sentence I just can't .

this is a boring novel.. the MC is soooooooo dumb he makes my phone lag when I'm reading this.. the system is irritating and the whole vibe is just down the drain.. let's not butter up this novel it sucks

I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….

Absolutely atrocius quality, I read Machine translation regularly. I will not read this. Story idea is nice but the actual development isn't interesting.

Don't bother reading this, it's the same cultivation novels template with boring cultivation system and world building, the main character is just plain stupid, the grammar is so bad that you lose brain cells every paragraph, the system is just terrible and annoying, what a great idea to make the one thing that will appear in almost every chapter extremely annoying, and why does it punish the main character every time he swears? Did the author really think that's interesting? I can go on and on just read at your own risk of losing brain cells.

Note to author: I haven't read this yet but there are a ton of negative reviews. Aye bro. Don't give up writing. It's like when we were little and used to try to tell grown ups our stories and things. At first we couldn't convey our messages clearly because we were too young. With more time and experience we learned how to express ourselves better. But even when we got a little older and learned how to say things more coherently our stories sometimes turned out to not be as grand as we thought them to be. Maybe this is like that. Don't give up.

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Chapter 30, i can't take anymore. The biggest problem here theres no space of every conversation. Just imagine the the whole parangraph and the author included the conversation of every characters, how long is that when you reading it?