webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of AashikaShah in Sparror Volume 1

Review detail

AashikaShah
AashikaShahLv12yrAashikaShah

A TOTALLY RECOMMENDABLE READ!! The narration is almost perfect, aside from a few grammatical errors here and there but those are pretty common. I love the way the characters are developed - slow but not so slow that it becomes boring. One thing I'd say is that the writing style is a little too descriptive after a point and sometimes doesn't make sense with the situation/event/setting. If the setting is focused on more, this book will be PERFECT.

altalt

Sparror Volume 1

JJ_Prakoso

Liked by 1 people

LIKE

Replies1

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoAuthorJJ_Prakoso

Thank you very much for the review, I truly appreciate it and I am very grateful you enjoy it, I am also very thankful for the advice you gave that will be very useful for the future especially with settings that sometimes over description and grammar problems.