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AashikaShah

AashikaShah

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"she's a queen. her soul is royalty." Since you accidentally stumbled across my profile (or book, hehe), well. Enjoy your stay here!

2021-04-03 JoinedIndia
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Replied to Loaded_Demigod29

    Okay, Rosalina and Karl are step-siblings. So for Benjamin, the father of the women here is Karl's nephew-in-law.

    Ch 5 Chapter 05
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    Blood of the Roses
    Fantasy · AashikaShah
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    Great job with the writing! I admire the world-building, it's the perfect combination of mystery and terror in a world of monsters. Slight writing issues but nothing that interrupts the reading flow. Definitely recommendable.

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    If I tell you, will you believe me?
    Fantasy · Dream_Fairy
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    this is getting interesting..

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    If I tell you, will you believe me?
    Fantasy · Dream_Fairy
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    Good job with constructing the story! It's worth a read and definitely recommendable. I love how revenge and reincarnation were brought together but the story is still grounded with Hazel's basic nature. Keep it up.

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    My Sister-In-Law Is My Mate!?!
    History · I_am_Creator
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    youch the girl's so pitiable

    "Sit with straight shoulders!" came the authoritative voice and Hazel did, but soon her shoulders started to hurt! She did not understand why it was needed to sit that way to eat. She tried a few times, but then gave up the idea. Hazel filled the spoon to the brim and started taking quick sips of the spoon earning another glare from lady Veronica and a smirk from Amelia.
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    My Sister-In-Law Is My Mate!?!
    History · I_am_Creator
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    Love the character development! Kinda slow, but intriguing. THE TENSION OMG, progress is excruciatingly slow but I admire your writing style, it's consistent. Would love to read more so do update quick!!

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    A Dragon & Her Yoga Teacher
    Fantasy · O_Lyn
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    yep i like that character development

    Ch 12 Feminists FTW
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    A Dragon & Her Yoga Teacher
    Fantasy · O_Lyn
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    oh sheeet

    "Augghhh…fine! We are dragon shapeshifters and we can only have human matches to produce offspring!" she blurted out in frustration.
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    A Dragon & Her Yoga Teacher
    Fantasy · O_Lyn
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    bro why would u do that i mean

    "I merely told him that you're a married woman and it will be best that he stay away from married women if he knows what's best for him," he said.
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    A Dragon & Her Yoga Teacher
    Fantasy · O_Lyn
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    im telling you, i dont like sci-fi at all, but this book changed my mind! well done, author. I love the way the world has been developed, slow and steady. characters also stay true to their personalities which is a must no matter what genre. really admiring!!

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    Irrevocably Lost In The Twilight
    Sci-fi · nanmenxing
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    This kind of writing is what I admire

    Ch 12 It was her!
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    Irrevocably Lost In The Twilight
    Sci-fi · nanmenxing
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    he has it rough oh dear

    They looked at me and my face lit up briefly, thinking how their youth and lives were much easier than mine. Then my face became a mask, and with malice my voice became a whisper.
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    Irrevocably Lost In The Twilight
    Sci-fi · nanmenxing
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    loving this!!!

    Ch 5 Stupid! This is stupid...
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    Irrevocably Lost In The Twilight
    Sci-fi · nanmenxing
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    A TOTALLY RECOMMENDABLE READ!! The narration is almost perfect, aside from a few grammatical errors here and there but those are pretty common. I love the way the characters are developed - slow but not so slow that it becomes boring. One thing I'd say is that the writing style is a little too descriptive after a point and sometimes doesn't make sense with the situation/event/setting. If the setting is focused on more, this book will be PERFECT.

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    Sparror Volume 1
    Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Posted

    I like this story, really! There were certain problems with the flow (or maybe it's just me) but I think they are overlooked by the strength of the plot. I'd still think maybe the style of writing could become more..descriptive? It's just what I feel but nevertheless, I like it.

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    My Man Is A Villain, So Am I!
    Fantasy · Soun_Phavin
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    IF ONLY THEY KNEW...

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    My Man Is A Villain, So Am I!
    Fantasy · Soun_Phavin
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    can she get a break omg

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    My Man Is A Villain, So Am I!
    Fantasy · Soun_Phavin
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    i sympathize with her sheesh

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    My Man Is A Villain, So Am I!
    Fantasy · Soun_Phavin
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    i pity his throat lol

    "FOLLOW US NOW!" The policeman shouted on top of his lung and waved his persuasion arms.
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    Sparror Volume 1
    Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
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  • AashikaShah
    AashikaShah2yr
    Commented

    i like this. it's subtle and not too idealistic. keeps it grounded.

    "It may look impossible" Hatoshi exclaimed with hopeful stares, "But, it doesn't mean it is not reachable if I try hard enough".
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    Sparror Volume 1
    Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
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