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2021-10-04 07:50

Monday 4, October, 2021 Current Reading: Chapter 47 "Experimentation" The writing although it had some error within the count of finger, it was great. arc 1 serves as a pseudo 30 chapters prologue because it sets the Main Character determination and place in the new world and growth to match what the world demands of her (and possibly because of her trolling partner that makes it harder but worth it for the mc growth) The detail and foreshadowing is sadistic, if you like action packed, scientific magic and a gothic lolita protagonist. try reading the first 30 chapters to see if it was worth it because boy that 30 chapters is epic! Bcause the author decided to be a little bit blur on every information of the world, the transmigration works a little differently, you don't know who in the oblivion you're transmigrated to and it feels like being shoved into someone else body without any insurance, if that doesn't sound fancy to you then try to read the first 30 chapters before you said that. the first chapter is good but I think it might turned off some readers who doesn't reach the prologue first arc (which is 30 chapters) give it a try :)

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Yup! pure y-w-ur--i, not a yeribait, although the mc first life gender is still a mystery, it seems like the author want us to fill the canon gender ourselves individually as it won't matter in the story, so female to female, male to female, up to you. As for the Heearem, I see that there is a hint there and there but the author already said on some chapter that there will only be one romance target but not confirmed who, then again that wasn't final. "also, remember, there has been shadddowbanningg going on. For reference, Sheeeadowbanniiinggng is when your comments or replies to a subject are Hidden from everyone else views and only you can see them. The problem is, that you are Not notified of this and you believe your comment has at least been read, where the truth is that nobody else has seen it, and any more comments you make are "deleted" Just today, an author notified its readers that webnovel has silently implement shadowbanning people who use curse words or scccx-related words making their comments invisible to everyone except themselves causing those comments to be "Deleted" so to speak. $€✗, d a mm, f**k, b a$t a rd, are the words i managed to get through the block, but typical formats such as sccccccex, dayyywwwmn, fwuuucckkjhck, shwwehehit, bawwwwsssstaeerrrd, and more are blocked, even if you write s*dddx, F*dddck, its also "deleted". Even the Most used word wwwtttfffffaa, is blocked, so you cannot write wwwtttffffaaaa anymore. You cannot put links anymore it seems. Since those are "deleted" too. So now you cannot comment with freedom and users are restricted on what they can or not write... But this can be expected from a place like webnovel, knowing who the dog owner is." so becareful when commenting folks

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holy moly, it took 10 times for it able to pass, I need to make a second account just to see if my post is sended or not

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This comment got shadowbanned as well.

Dunge:Yup! pure y-w-ur--i, not a yeribait, although the mc first life gender is still a mystery, it seems like the author want us to fill the canon gender ourselves individually as it won't matter in the story, so female to female, male to female, up to you. As for the Heearem, I see that there is a hint there and there but the author already said on some chapter that there will only be one romance target but not confirmed who, then again that wasn't final. "also, remember, there has been shadddowbanningg going on. For reference, Sheeeadowbanniiinggng is when your comments or replies to a subject are Hidden from everyone else views and only you can see them. The problem is, that you are Not notified of this and you believe your comment has at least been read, where the truth is that nobody else has seen it, and any more comments you make are "deleted" Just today, an author notified its readers that webnovel has silently implement shadowbanning people who use curse words or scccx-related words making their comments invisible to everyone except themselves causing those comments to be "Deleted" so to speak. $€✗, d a mm, f**k, b a$t a rd, are the words i managed to get through the block, but typical formats such as sccccccex, dayyywwwmn, fwuuucckkjhck, shwwehehit, bawwwwsssstaeerrrd, and more are blocked, even if you write s*dddx, F*dddck, its also "deleted". Even the Most used word wwwtttfffffaa, is blocked, so you cannot write wwwtttffffaaaa anymore. You cannot put links anymore it seems. Since those are "deleted" too. So now you cannot comment with freedom and users are restricted on what they can or not write... But this can be expected from a place like webnovel, knowing who the dog owner is." so becareful when commenting folks
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Not really a huge fan of this website especially because I can't farm exp anymore but this probably one of the great work available out there. Pros: 1. The author's writing is readable because YES, THERE IS SO MANY BAD GRAMMAR AND WRITING OUT THERE IN THS PLATFORM THAT I'M BECOMING NUMB TO IT! 2. Science, yes, if you like science? Then try this one, most of the fiction is related to the available theory and how real life interact with it REALISTICALLY 3. The action is too full action packed, yes it's so good that it has so many layers in it that it doesn't feels forced but more on how it's just the MC's bad luck cause that is the theme of the story apparently 4. The MC isn't op at first but it feels like reading Saga of Tanya or Youjo Senki where sometimes the people (in third person pov) will just misunderstood the mc in some scenario, although it doesn't quite get the iconic senior and junior interaction with two sides on the wrong path (please do this author, you haven't done this yet) 5. Suffering, yes, there is no battle where the mc doesn't suffer which is rather pitiful and great, there is extra chapters with different author and both of them are a sadist. So if you don't like where the mc struggle real hard in something then get a great reward, then this is not for you 6. Second person pov, seriously. I do write too but second person pov as the major pov for the whole and works for none contemporary romance and drama? This is too absurd, the author deserve a better platform 7. The author is a poet sometimes 8. Great world building, it's science and cultivation having a ehem. 9. Show not tell, with many details. like how the mc gain an access to a hidden realm that spews out lemon juice(not exactly) into her body from her miniature realm and the supposedly doppelganger got also the same subtances because both of them is connected and on the next the doppelganger knows that she is CONNECTED and stops trying to kill the mc because it means it would just be a self-annihilation Cons: 1. Second Person Pov, not many is used to it so it's a rather strange choice for the author and if he/she wants to be different then that is fine though for the sake of the author exposure, my tips for the author: don't hope much 2. Science, yes, some might get turned off so if you don't like a well thought out chemistry of magical programing with physics laws and matters? Then this book will throw many of that on the first try of MC discovering the technique. even the whole mana shenanigans comes from Strings Theory which is a part of quantum physics 3. Pace, unnaturally slow? it is alright for me but for the majority I read it is not as slow as this. Then again this is also a plus because there is so many things going on and there is no such thing as filler, everything matters but there is too many details where it was great because it was good and matters to the story snd character grows so... well, bot cons and pros I guess? 4. Upload schedule, it will be random, like really random, sometimes there is a day it doesn't update and the next we get two chapters. hours too, also the cliffhanger is nasty so please spare MY LIFE! 5 Jack of all trade, the author is tackling too many concept, it's great so far but hope it won't be a dissapointment later 6. The early won't have much, and more of "Where am I!? Who am I!? Why I'm suffering and why is there a nightmare fuel!? why I'm gargling blood!? why my partner is a sadistic f---" because the gimmick is that the MC doesn't know anything as she doesn't even know what is her past life leading to a rather hollow mc at first, but it's get better as she feels excitement and anxiety especially after chapter 20 7. Why it feels shounen sometimes? not hating on shounen and besides, it was pretty build up like how the doppelganger was foreshadowed when she is in hospital, the world is dark but the tone are not, there is gore but there is comedy and fluf? Many emotion and atmosphere... wait, this should be on the pros section! And with that, I want you whoever read this to read this masterpiece, even if you don't like second person pov, just try it fo a new experience sake.

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