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Epitaffy
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2021-08-20 10:14

I don't really partake in reading a lot of stories nowadays and I might be bias in this review but it's a good book that's worthwhile reading. The world is expansive with meticulous thought given to it, the characters are charming and there are definitely moments that are comedic. I appreciate the fact that the author decides to challenge themselves into writing an original second person point of view, a literal leap of faith in the writing industry. No risk no reward, they say. The MC is called Long Leggy unironically and it works. I think the name itself deserves a bit of reading because of how ridiculous it is and if you don't like it, that's fine as well. What we like is subjective.

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Yokoyokai
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For the readers here, I reccomend searching "Spirits For Masks" It's still new and not verified, give it some love! It is a good first person pov story (still chapter one) about a female oni samurai, there will be a lot of youkai stuff. This person is the author huehue. And please dear author, I need my next chapter. And thanks for the review!

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Yokoyokai:For the readers here, I reccomend searching "Spirits For Masks" It's still new and not verified, give it some love! It is a good first person pov story (still chapter one) about a female oni samurai, there will be a lot of youkai stuff. This person is the author huehue. And please dear author, I need my next chapter. And thanks for the review!
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Not really a huge fan of this website especially because I can't farm exp anymore but this probably one of the great work available out there. Pros: 1. The author's writing is readable because YES, THERE IS SO MANY BAD GRAMMAR AND WRITING OUT THERE IN THS PLATFORM THAT I'M BECOMING NUMB TO IT! 2. Science, yes, if you like science? Then try this one, most of the fiction is related to the available theory and how real life interact with it REALISTICALLY 3. The action is too full action packed, yes it's so good that it has so many layers in it that it doesn't feels forced but more on how it's just the MC's bad luck cause that is the theme of the story apparently 4. The MC isn't op at first but it feels like reading Saga of Tanya or Youjo Senki where sometimes the people (in third person pov) will just misunderstood the mc in some scenario, although it doesn't quite get the iconic senior and junior interaction with two sides on the wrong path (please do this author, you haven't done this yet) 5. Suffering, yes, there is no battle where the mc doesn't suffer which is rather pitiful and great, there is extra chapters with different author and both of them are a sadist. So if you don't like where the mc struggle real hard in something then get a great reward, then this is not for you 6. Second person pov, seriously. I do write too but second person pov as the major pov for the whole and works for none contemporary romance and drama? This is too absurd, the author deserve a better platform 7. The author is a poet sometimes 8. Great world building, it's science and cultivation having a ehem. 9. Show not tell, with many details. like how the mc gain an access to a hidden realm that spews out lemon juice(not exactly) into her body from her miniature realm and the supposedly doppelganger got also the same subtances because both of them is connected and on the next the doppelganger knows that she is CONNECTED and stops trying to kill the mc because it means it would just be a self-annihilation Cons: 1. Second Person Pov, not many is used to it so it's a rather strange choice for the author and if he/she wants to be different then that is fine though for the sake of the author exposure, my tips for the author: don't hope much 2. Science, yes, some might get turned off so if you don't like a well thought out chemistry of magical programing with physics laws and matters? Then this book will throw many of that on the first try of MC discovering the technique. even the whole mana shenanigans comes from Strings Theory which is a part of quantum physics 3. Pace, unnaturally slow? it is alright for me but for the majority I read it is not as slow as this. Then again this is also a plus because there is so many things going on and there is no such thing as filler, everything matters but there is too many details where it was great because it was good and matters to the story snd character grows so... well, bot cons and pros I guess? 4. Upload schedule, it will be random, like really random, sometimes there is a day it doesn't update and the next we get two chapters. hours too, also the cliffhanger is nasty so please spare MY LIFE! 5 Jack of all trade, the author is tackling too many concept, it's great so far but hope it won't be a dissapointment later 6. The early won't have much, and more of "Where am I!? Who am I!? Why I'm suffering and why is there a nightmare fuel!? why I'm gargling blood!? why my partner is a sadistic f---" because the gimmick is that the MC doesn't know anything as she doesn't even know what is her past life leading to a rather hollow mc at first, but it's get better as she feels excitement and anxiety especially after chapter 20 7. Why it feels shounen sometimes? not hating on shounen and besides, it was pretty build up like how the doppelganger was foreshadowed when she is in hospital, the world is dark but the tone are not, there is gore but there is comedy and fluf? Many emotion and atmosphere... wait, this should be on the pros section! And with that, I want you whoever read this to read this masterpiece, even if you don't like second person pov, just try it fo a new experience sake.

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