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Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv153yr
2022-02-28 21:46

I liked it a lot, invested in the characters, invested in the situations that were arising and invested in the characters growth, but when the mc's got along they got a boost that undermines the whole status growth of the novel and the author decides to do the tried and true method of obtaining a pet dragon, that I predicted right out of the gate, overall not a bad novel just annoying and ruins its own potential, if it gets alot more chapters than it has maybe it can redeem itself but for now, I hesitate to read more and regret buying the chapters

Death Ascension

Tiene_Lass
4.9
132 Chs

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Tiene_Lass
Tiene_LassAuthor

hi! the infinite mana is a one time thing tho. as said in the chapter, when the system detects the slightest internal conflict, the perfect assimilation gets cancelled. so in later chapters, they go back to normal (you can't always get along with people right?) as for the dragon egg, there are lots of dragons in that world tho so their adopted dragon is not a unique thing (it's the last of it's species but not the last dragon) i hope you don't drop it coz the next arc is better (imo) still, thank you very much for the review! :D have a great day!

3yr
Tiene_Lass
Tiene_LassAuthor

something like 'the last dalmatian but not the last dog'

Tiene_Lass:hi! the infinite mana is a one time thing tho. as said in the chapter, when the system detects the slightest internal conflict, the perfect assimilation gets cancelled. so in later chapters, they go back to normal (you can't always get along with people right?) as for the dragon egg, there are lots of dragons in that world tho so their adopted dragon is not a unique thing (it's the last of it's species but not the last dragon) i hope you don't drop it coz the next arc is better (imo) still, thank you very much for the review! :D have a great day!
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