I read 50ish chapter so far and feel some what burnt out... I got to say like most people. Cons. 1- to much info dump on stats. 2- to much nerfing. Sorry to say this, but he could have been op and be a chill mc at the same time would have been a good book to read. In your pace type of mc. 3- Continues from the nerfing is your forcing plot. like losing his arm, or forcing him to tank a op hit when he could have stop it. What the point in giving him massive amount of luck. 4- the system is useless... don't know why you gave him a system if you gunna nerf him everytime. Feels like the system = info dumps. Pros. There is only one and that is your writing is readable. In conclusion is your novel worth patron? No. When it be worth it? After you stop nerfing and info dumping your mc. Will you ever read my post probably not, but it will help other people to know what is the problems with this novel. So they don't have to repeatedly saying the same thing everyone else had said about the flaws on this novel.
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